Sweet Jane 61 Posted May 30, 2007 Report Share Posted May 30, 2007 I wrote this poem about 20 years ago when I thought I found my lifetime love. I found it and thought I would post it, with hopes of maybe finding a love so wonderful again. And maybe some of you will relate with the love you have now. I WILL I will be your joy when you are melancholy, I will be your strength when you are weak... I will hold your hand when you can't speak. I will kiss away any tears you shed, I will embrace you to ease your pain... I will be there when all seems insane. I will be your light when the world is dark, I will take a step back when you need solitude... I will try to understand your different moods. I will be your smile at days end, I will be the warmth against you at night... I will kiss you awake at dawns light. I will cherish your love daily, I will give you my love without hesitation... I will stand by you as we reach our destination. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jenny Posted May 30, 2007 Report Share Posted May 30, 2007 It's so beautiful, I have tears in my eyes.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Jane 61 Posted May 30, 2007 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2007 Thanks Jenny. At the time I was in deep love and thought it was forever. Love is great when it's that strong. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jenny Posted May 30, 2007 Report Share Posted May 30, 2007 Well, save for one line, it could be about your love for your daughter, right? Now there's a life long, unconditional love! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Jane 61 Posted May 30, 2007 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2007 Jenny you are right, it could with a couple of line changes, and a childs love is life long and nothing ever compares. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Tenacious_Peaches Posted May 30, 2007 Report Share Posted May 30, 2007 I like the idea of the love of a person's life changing from a significant other to a child. Now I'm going to cry... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Jane 61 Posted May 30, 2007 Author Report Share Posted May 30, 2007 Thanks Peaches. I cried when I found this last night, mainly remembering how wonderful a love like that can be. You love someone and you are their best friend also. That is how it was, when I wrote it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Kronos Posted May 30, 2007 Report Share Posted May 30, 2007 Very nice! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Jane 61 Posted June 1, 2007 Author Report Share Posted June 1, 2007 Thanks kronos! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayzor Posted June 2, 2007 Report Share Posted June 2, 2007 Fantastique! I like it alot! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Jane 61 Posted June 2, 2007 Author Report Share Posted June 2, 2007 Thanks Ray, one of my favs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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