Blue Fish Posted May 20, 2007 Report Share Posted May 20, 2007 (edited) No memories where there should be Shadows, fleeting unknown feelings What is it? Something wrong? I don’t know, I’m half of me. I’m not all there, I’m broken Don’t want fixing, this is me The answers here with the problem Maybe I’m not to broken There has to be a part of me Floating around lost Because, I’m not all here So some of me is elsewhere, see? Its fine, I’m just not there There are times I am, fleeting smiles But I’m harmless enough, mostly I’m just existing, living is rare. Edited May 20, 2007 by Guest missed a "there" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayzor Posted May 20, 2007 Report Share Posted May 20, 2007 Gotta say that last line goes well with the title. You are very creative and can touch souls with writing like this. I like this, especially the last part. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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