MuzikTyme Posted June 22, 2004 Report Share Posted June 22, 2004 The tides flowed freely Before they had names Now only memory Even though they remain As clouds without rain Shall the time of all blame Shout fiercely while voices Still calls the same name Around and around always Sounds the first time Everything and nothing Distinguishes no rhyme How can it be? What may thy ask? For the choice always was Although now not thy task The first thought is no The second's cry please The third why oh why As thy fall to thy knees Now grimace and gnash And see for the first time The glimpse of eternity 'Tis the start of the line Time's now no more No thing such as wait Even the worst thought Can't compare to thy fate Knowing all evil And seeing the core The slow motion blur As the mind is no more Each thought is enemy Kidnapped and chained As the tides flow freely Yet now have no name... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jillianne Posted June 22, 2004 Report Share Posted June 22, 2004 Did you write that? x Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MuzikTyme Posted June 22, 2004 Author Report Share Posted June 22, 2004 Yes, about a year ago. Hopefully this forum is limited to members' original writings. Thanks for reading, Gilliann. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jillianne Posted June 23, 2004 Report Share Posted June 23, 2004 Thats brill! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Surrealisticpillows Posted August 11, 2004 Report Share Posted August 11, 2004 That was great, I would love to see more of your stuff. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
PSYCHOcatholic Posted August 11, 2004 Report Share Posted August 11, 2004 I read alot of Poetry, i dont think ive ever seen anything like that. Like Gillian said, its Brilliant. Would you mind explaining it? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MuzikTyme Posted August 11, 2004 Author Report Share Posted August 11, 2004 Glad you guys enjoyed reading it. Basically, it's the beginning of eternity for a doomed soul. If you haven't already read it, there's another piece by me on the third page of Creative Writing: -IT- Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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