Sweet Jane 61 Posted March 31, 2006 Report Share Posted March 31, 2006 This poem takes you back to being in high school and thinking love is forever. I'll love you forever, he said as he lay her down. Trust me, I would never hurt you he whispered, our love will become stronger... he promised as he kissed her. Never leave me, she said with desperation. Give me your love and fullfill me, never will I love another, she vowed... together you and I will always be. Their two bodies became as one with desire, feelings of passion burning inside. His thoughts over come by lust... hers wishing to be his bride. Promises that were made in a moment, soon became a bed of lies. Forever I can't give you, he confessed... I know, I always knew, she cries. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel2Velvet Posted March 31, 2006 Report Share Posted March 31, 2006 I like this a lot, Jane. Has great rythmn and flow to it, as well as that outstanding theme that rings true to any of us at an emotional level beyond 22 or so years old. Very nice work! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Sweet Jane 61 Posted March 31, 2006 Author Report Share Posted March 31, 2006 Thanks Ron, it was so easy to write back 20 years ago. We have all been in that place. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Laurie_ Posted March 31, 2006 Report Share Posted March 31, 2006 very nice Jane...I never really wrote much, but hubby wrote quite a few poems for me.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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