scott Posted June 14, 2004 Report Share Posted June 14, 2004 I wrote this one last night, it's pretty decent, it has an intro verse and chorus that follows a different structure then the other two, so I thought that was pretty cool. Distortion Ethos You're getting cold Problems may not be a stranger But I believe we may be in danger Jusst ignore the impending doom Springing forth from Hell's dark fiery womb It's okay to just ignore me Skies must look blue as far as you can see It's growing old Feed me your distortion ethos Whatever you say don't even come close Indulgence is a lethal dose The evident warning leaves you comatose You're fading out Hope you're prepared for the earthquake Moral upbringings quickly start to shake I'll just lie in wait, still awake All your valuesI will forsake "Everything in the world is mine to take" 'Cause what you say comes off as fake I know the future is ours to make It's spreading doubt Feed me your distortion ethos Whatever you say don't even come close you indulge in a lethal dose I warned you, you became comatose You're killing me Explaining my last final call All I'm saying is the sky just might fall You're just going to stall You say my tales are oh so very tall And what I say is to apall Truth is you honestly don't care at all You cease to be. Feed me your distortion ethos Whatever you say don't even come close you indulge in a lethal dose I warned you, you became comatose Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danielj Posted September 7, 2004 Report Share Posted September 7, 2004 I wrote this one last night, it's pretty decent, it has an intro verse and chorus that follows a different structure then the other two, so I thought that was pretty cool. Distortion Ethos You're getting cold Problems may not be a stranger But I believe we may be in danger Jusst ignore the impending doom Springing forth from Hell's dark fiery womb It's okay to just ignore me Skies must look blue as far as you can see It's growing old Feed me your distortion ethos Whatever you say don't even come close Indulgence is a lethal dose The evident warning leaves you comatose You're fading out Hope you're prepared for the earthquake Moral upbringings quickly start to shake I'll just lie in wait, still awake All your valuesI will forsake "Everything in the world is mine to take" 'Cause what you say comes off as fake I know the future is ours to make It's spreading doubt Feed me your distortion ethos Whatever you say don't even come close you indulge in a lethal dose I warned you, you became comatose You're killing me Explaining my last final call All I'm saying is the sky just might fall You're just going to stall You say my tales are oh so very tall And what I say is to apall Truth is you honestly don't care at all You cease to be. Feed me your distortion ethos Whatever you say don't even come close you indulge in a lethal dose I warned you, you became comatose You know While I was reading this I swear, i worked up a perfect tune and intro/outro. DEFINETLY good. Way to be dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted September 8, 2004 Report Share Posted September 8, 2004 I like it. Yes, I do! "Feed me your distortion ethos Whatever you say don't even come close Indulgence is a lethal dose The evident warning leaves you comatose... I warned you, you became comatose " Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
scott Posted September 8, 2004 Author Report Share Posted September 8, 2004 Oh, thanks guys, I forgot that I even posted this one, thanks for the reminder And DJ, I'd love to see what your intro is like (if you know your music or tabulature, if you don't, that's cool too) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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