LynyrdSkynyrdAreFreeBirds Posted July 13, 2005 Report Share Posted July 13, 2005 Guilt Like cold water going down my throat I sensed a feeling of guilt Whoever could have guessed that mistakes lead to pain The pain of others, and sorrow in myself I never knew that what I had done Could lead to so much pain The warmth left me As I tried to forget I tried to change myself But the haunting thoughts came back It's horrible to feel the pain of others When stupidity could have been so easily avoided What I feel now is missing Because I am not myself I tried to change But people hated my old self Because of what I had done By my own hand I slowly fade away with happy memories And stay in the bad ones How could I have been so stupid? I should have learned before what I had done A part of me is missing And guilt has replaced Should I say sorry? To the people I hurt? Would they believe me? Or would they care? Could they forgive me? Or will they forget me? Everyone deserves another shot Only if they mean it in their heart Forgiveness can make people feel better Hate and painful memories tear you apart A chance of redemption Can boost a new start Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Lucky Posted July 13, 2005 Report Share Posted July 13, 2005 short and simple I like this. I need to let some other people read it. :: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LynyrdSkynyrdAreFreeBirds Posted July 14, 2005 Author Report Share Posted July 14, 2005 short and simple I like this. I need to let some other people read it. :: Thank you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elvish Posted July 14, 2005 Report Share Posted July 14, 2005 I like it too - can definitely identify with it. Good job, FreeBirds. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LynyrdSkynyrdAreFreeBirds Posted July 15, 2005 Author Report Share Posted July 15, 2005 I like it too - can definitely identify with it. Good job, FreeBirds. Thanks. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edna Posted July 16, 2005 Report Share Posted July 16, 2005 It´s very good, I like it... Do you like "Stairway to heaven"? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LynyrdSkynyrdAreFreeBirds Posted July 16, 2005 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2005 It´s very good, I like it... Do you like "Stairway to heaven"? Yes, that's a good song. Why do you ask?. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edna Posted July 16, 2005 Report Share Posted July 16, 2005 Just curious. I like Led Zep too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LynyrdSkynyrdAreFreeBirds Posted July 16, 2005 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2005 Just curious. I like Led Zep too. No really, why did you ask?. That question was out of nowhere. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edna Posted July 16, 2005 Report Share Posted July 16, 2005 You´re right... I should have asked about your writing. Never mind. I like the meaning of your poem, it shows you care about other´s feelings. Do you have some other? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted July 16, 2005 Report Share Posted July 16, 2005 Perhaps Edna felt your lyrics felt like they were Led Zep inspired, or they reminded her of a Led Zep song. I'm curious as to the inspiration of the poem/song. The subject in question must have done something that hurt alot of people at once, or really disappointed them. Dealing with feelings of letting people down is difficult - writing about them helps put it into perspective. Your writing is good and you can feel the enormous guilt about the bad they have done. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LynyrdSkynyrdAreFreeBirds Posted July 16, 2005 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2005 You´re right... I should have asked about your writing. Never mind. I like the meaning of your poem, it shows you care about other´s feelings. Do you have some other? I'm not giving out to you, I was just wondering. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LynyrdSkynyrdAreFreeBirds Posted July 16, 2005 Author Report Share Posted July 16, 2005 Perhaps Edna felt your lyrics felt like they were Led Zep inspired, or they reminded her of a Led Zep song. I'm curious as to the inspiration of the poem/song. The subject in question must have done something that hurt alot of people at once, or really disappointed them. Dealing with feelings of letting people down is difficult - writing about them helps put it into perspective. Your writing is good and you can feel the enormous guilt about the bad they have done. Yes, the thing that I had done hurt alot of people and me, and I regret it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted July 16, 2005 Report Share Posted July 16, 2005 Apologising sincerely to the people you hurt may not always cause them to forgive you, but it aids in your concience being eased. Whether people choose to forgive others or not is up to them. Often we can forgive but not forget. It is often better to turn your back on a situation where you have asked for forgiveness, and start afresh with a clear concience. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Ken Posted July 17, 2005 Report Share Posted July 17, 2005 The person you had hurt, was her name................ Judith? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Batman Posted July 17, 2005 Report Share Posted July 17, 2005 Or was her name.........Songfacts? If this guy isn't who we think he is, he's probably incredibly confused right now. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LynyrdSkynyrdAreFreeBirds Posted July 17, 2005 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2005 The person you had hurt, was her name................ Judith? Who's Judith?. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LynyrdSkynyrdAreFreeBirds Posted July 17, 2005 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2005 Or was her name.........Songfacts? If this guy isn't who we think he is, he's probably incredibly confused right now. What?!. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Batman Posted July 17, 2005 Report Share Posted July 17, 2005 I'll PM you and explain everything. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LynyrdSkynyrdAreFreeBirds Posted July 17, 2005 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2005 I'll PM you and explain everything. OK then............. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edna Posted July 17, 2005 Report Share Posted July 17, 2005 As usual, Batman comes from the shadows to clear and fix it all!!! How couldn´t we love you, Will?? That´s a great guy!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
LynyrdSkynyrdAreFreeBirds Posted July 17, 2005 Author Report Share Posted July 17, 2005 As usual, Batman comes from the shadows to clear and fix it all!!! How couldn´t we love you, Will?? That´s a great guy!!! THANKS BATMAN!!!. THIS COULD BE THE START OF A NEW FRIENDSHIP!!!. :guitar: :: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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