CaptainMikeRS Posted May 22, 2005 Report Share Posted May 22, 2005 This is my 20th song, progressive rock tune. About moving on, wrote it while thinking of graduation from high school in two weeks and other events. Twilight at the Sea (Written May 21, 2005 by Mike R. Smale © 2005) Throw a rose into the water, let the gilded breakers bathe your mind. Loosen yourself in the briny liquor, abandon the boundaries of time. The horizon sinks alongside the sun. The stars come forth in a glossy ribbon. Spoils from a battle that was never won. Vapors splash your face and heart, your concluding voyage- you're about to embark. Over the seas to lands unknown, a pilgrim without a journey home. The horizon sinks alongside the sun. The stars come forth in a glossy ribbon. Letters to the spirits when a day is done. Throw a rose into the water, let the gilded breakers bathe your mind. Loosen yourself in the briny liquor, abandon the boundaries of time. Lose the world to time. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jenny Posted May 23, 2005 Report Share Posted May 23, 2005 Very pretty imagery. I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uncle Joe Posted May 23, 2005 Report Share Posted May 23, 2005 I like it. A lot!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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