CaptainMikeRS Posted May 16, 2005 Report Share Posted May 16, 2005 Another new poem of mine from the many I've been writing daily now. This one is about escaping the troubles of the world. The West Moon (Written May 16, 2005 by Mike R. Smale © 2005) Run by the west moon- past the shadowed mountains and falling laughing upon the gaining ground. Catch the night rain and bathe the black grasses until they flow to the floods of the sea. Forget not the Gypsy- yet dig the hole deep, and defend yourself from the coming night with laughter. Your hair will grow long- and the wind shall wipe your eyes. Go deep, but run lightly by the west moon. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted May 16, 2005 Report Share Posted May 16, 2005 I really like this one, Mike. I can see the story very clearly in my mind and it paints a very vivid picture! LOvely writing, as always! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
EagleEye0 Posted May 23, 2005 Report Share Posted May 23, 2005 I think it was good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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