New Song

[Bobo]

I should really come back here and say hi. Well, this is near enough my way of doing so. I've gotten a couple of new songs, this is the one I wrote in a 45 minute spell last night - it's definitely going on my new album, so long as I can tweak the song to make it what it needs to be before it can be recorded.

Here goes - structure and all.

v1)

A searing kiss 'twixt me and you

A knife for one, a blade for two

Demeaning sickly treason fades away

The twisting knife burns deep inside

Sweet bleeding cannot be denied

My dearest arrows evanesce to grey

pre-chorus)

But who needs to know

When it's all my life depends on?

There's no-one below

So all I can do is remain so strong

chorus)

I'm weak, but baby how I need you here

You freak but I console my dearest friends

They needn't know anything about me

You know I wouldn't ever want to let you down

But if you leave there'd be no sound

No way to know when if you smile you see me?

Don't leave me dying here

bridge)

I'll never know so many things

If we go solo we'll hear sorrow sings

But never if we go together, baby

I know you want to see me standing proud

But when will your conscience be allowed to say

That you weren't meant to save me?

prechorus)

You don't need to know

When it's only me depends on

Your beauty will grow

But if you live you'll carry on

chorus)

You're weak, and you can't see me lying here

So sleek, so damn unprepared for fear

But never when you're there beside me

Listen to me, I'm never gonna let you down

When beat, the best defenders wear no crown of thorns

They never knew that they denied me

v2)

Paraded for my soul to see

I know you would want the same for me

If you could only understand, my baby

Girl, let me know he bleeds for two

But he could never see that part of me is you

My deadly sin, my flimsy paper lady

prechorus)

You don't need to know

When it's only me depends on

Your beauty will grow

But if you live you'll carry on

chorus)

You're weak, you'll never know I'm lying here

I'm gone at the very trace of fear

So long as you're not prepared to face the fight

Can't let you go, must tell you that I'm there for you

I care, but I'm not there to see the pain of two

You always knew I'd be there to see your light

It seems lame that I'm begging for feedback, but..

Nice to see y'all again.

Matt

[Earth-Angel]

Nice to see you back on the boards and not just the Who's Online screen, Matt

Good song too, when is this album in production and will we get to hear some of it before you make it big?

[Bobo]

Grins. Thank you. I'm not going to start recording the album until I've got the twelve songs for it - currently I have five, (I'm thinking this is going to be the fifth) and am thinking on working on more over the next week.

It might be ready in two months time if I get my act together.

Thank you for your comments, earth-angel.

Matt

Good song too, when is this album in production and will we get to hear some of it before you make it big?