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I wrote this in Cuba, when I was away for a week. You wouldn't believe how much I missed Sara. This song has all my emotions in it, so please some feedback.

I flew away from you yesterday

To a completely different world

It's warmer and more beautiful here

But I can't enjoy it at all

It's been two full days since you were by my side

And I miss you oh so much

I'm lying in this so-called paradise

Dauydreaming of being with you. . . At Home

The Sun Here Reminds Me Of You

Brighter Than Anything Else

The Sun Here Has Shown Me

I Love You More Than Anything Else

When I sit and think for a while

The heat only dampens my spirit

When I look into the sea

I see your pretty face.

Walking along the shoreline

Each beautiful summer night

Wishing you were here with me

Or I was back with you. . . At Home

The Sun Here Reminds Me Of You

Brighter Than Anything Else

The Sun Here Has Shown Me

I Love You More Than Anything Else

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That is really pretty Dan. All these guys who have so much love for the person in their life is admirable, really touching. You should show her, if she doesn't know how you feel about her now she sure will have no doubt after your poem. :D

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I have music, i didnt think youd want it.

Intro/Outro switching fast from DCG EE DCG DE

VErses D C F then

-0-0-3----------

-0-3-3---------

-2-2-2----------

-2-2-2----------

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chorus goes like this

-0----0----0--------------

-0----0----0--------------

-4----6----8--------------

-5----7----9--------------

-3----5----7--------------

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no chris, saras my mom. . . . .. not :neener:

But seriously, thanks everyone, songfacts rules, even ifi dont come on as much, the times i do i love it.

Thanks for all the compliments.

Sue, what the eff hapened to your msn?

I did show her btw, but only on msn cause she forced me, im gonna play it for her though, ill probably [bleep] my pants halfway through, but maybe shell love it. . .if you know what i mean. "Dan you ladies man"

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I wanna hear all about Sara.... =:P

Dan, was it the same Sara that liked you? So you don´t have to be nervous, she´ll like you more after she hears your song!!! :thumbsup:

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