Danielj Posted April 7, 2005 Report Share Posted April 7, 2005 I wrote this in Cuba, when I was away for a week. You wouldn't believe how much I missed Sara. This song has all my emotions in it, so please some feedback. I flew away from you yesterday To a completely different world It's warmer and more beautiful here But I can't enjoy it at all It's been two full days since you were by my side And I miss you oh so much I'm lying in this so-called paradise Dauydreaming of being with you. . . At Home The Sun Here Reminds Me Of You Brighter Than Anything Else The Sun Here Has Shown Me I Love You More Than Anything Else When I sit and think for a while The heat only dampens my spirit When I look into the sea I see your pretty face. Walking along the shoreline Each beautiful summer night Wishing you were here with me Or I was back with you. . . At Home The Sun Here Reminds Me Of You Brighter Than Anything Else The Sun Here Has Shown Me I Love You More Than Anything Else Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aunt_Acid Posted April 8, 2005 Report Share Posted April 8, 2005 Who's Sara, your girlfriend? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edna Posted April 8, 2005 Report Share Posted April 8, 2005 I like it... did you show it to her? Add some music, she´ll love it more yet. Good to hear from you, Daniel! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mairi Posted April 8, 2005 Report Share Posted April 8, 2005 You have to show her it, it was beautiful. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted April 8, 2005 Report Share Posted April 8, 2005 That is really pretty Dan. All these guys who have so much love for the person in their life is admirable, really touching. You should show her, if she doesn't know how you feel about her now she sure will have no doubt after your poem. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danielj Posted April 11, 2005 Author Report Share Posted April 11, 2005 I have music, i didnt think youd want it. Intro/Outro switching fast from DCG EE DCG DE VErses D C F then -0-0-3---------- -0-3-3--------- -2-2-2---------- -2-2-2---------- -------------- ------------- chorus goes like this -0----0----0-------------- -0----0----0-------------- -4----6----8-------------- -5----7----9-------------- -3----5----7-------------- ----------------------- no chris, saras my mom. . . . .. not But seriously, thanks everyone, songfacts rules, even ifi dont come on as much, the times i do i love it. Thanks for all the compliments. Sue, what the eff hapened to your msn? I did show her btw, but only on msn cause she forced me, im gonna play it for her though, ill probably [bleep] my pants halfway through, but maybe shell love it. . .if you know what i mean. "Dan you ladies man" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted April 11, 2005 Report Share Posted April 11, 2005 Dan, my MSN is at home in the hotel room - the place I fear to tread! I'll hook up with you when I'm on next I wanna hear all about Sara.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edna Posted April 11, 2005 Report Share Posted April 11, 2005 I wanna hear all about Sara.... Dan, was it the same Sara that liked you? So you don´t have to be nervous, she´ll like you more after she hears your song!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uncle Joe Posted April 11, 2005 Report Share Posted April 11, 2005 Dan my man, you're a doggggg! I'm so proud to know you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Foxy Posted April 11, 2005 Report Share Posted April 11, 2005 Wow, I'd be flattered if someone wrote that about me, it's just soooo personal to have something written about you. Lovely touch Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pete38890 Posted April 11, 2005 Report Share Posted April 11, 2005 Outstanding. Guantanamo? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danielj Posted January 16, 2006 Author Report Share Posted January 16, 2006 I was a fruiter wasnt i Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted January 16, 2006 Report Share Posted January 16, 2006 Even when it goes sour Dan, the song is still good Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Foxy Posted January 16, 2006 Report Share Posted January 16, 2006 I agree - I think it was even better reading it the second time round. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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