jute86 Posted March 14, 2005 Report Share Posted March 14, 2005 I can't really give much of a description for this one...just looking for any input you can give... If Only They Knew Traffic down on Broadway A little girl without a cause A faithless effort to cross some roads A desperate hope to erase what she saw Two rage-filled parents And a frame on the wall Some shattered glass And a 911 call [CHORUS] And she walks on to nowhere To a town without a name To a place where she?s wanted And where nothing?s the same To a day without mommy And a night without dad To a life without screaming To much more than she?s had For a day with no black And a night with no blue Sometimes there?s no telling What this little girl might do Oh, if they only knew A little sidewalk wanderer A darkened city street Past blankets over boxes By a faded old car seat She cries herself to sleep An unknown orphan all alone She spends a black night weeping With nowhere to call home [CHORUS] And she walks on to nowhere To a town without a name To a place where she?s wanted And where nothing?s the same To a day without mommy And a night without dad To a life without screaming To much more than she?s had For a day with no black And a night with no blue Sometimes there?s no telling What this little girl might do Oh, if they only knew She just wants a hand To hold when she cries She just wants a voice To sing her good night And for a minute or two Who knows what she?d do Oh, if only they knew :: Laura Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
windy1 Posted March 14, 2005 Report Share Posted March 14, 2005 Oh jute this is really good. As a song I could really see it country, with a couple changes. This is excellent. Heck leave it alone. This is a good song just as it is! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jenny Posted March 14, 2005 Report Share Posted March 14, 2005 It's beautiful, Laura. That's all I can say. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrampledUnderFoot Posted March 16, 2005 Report Share Posted March 16, 2005 I really enjoyed that...and windy is right...I can hear this as a country song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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