TrampledUnderFoot Posted March 2, 2005 Report Share Posted March 2, 2005 Never done this...I'm more of a short story person, but here goes... ~Blued Eyed Boy With His Red Guitar~ Blued eyed boy with his red guitar away he takes her heart, part by part Browned eyed girl, only 16 but time has worn her away, you see Alone she stands, and watches him play piece by piece he steals her heart away He doesn't take notice, doesn't give her a glance it's no surprise to her, she's never had a chance Blued eyed boy with his red guitar dreams of being a famous star Laughter from them, it really stings And time is wearing him away it seems Both are never noticed, never given any thought He gives up his dreams, moves on through the rot She gives up on him, moves far away But dreams of that blued eyed boy to this very day :: Just a corny love tune/poem (not sure which) dont be afraid to be honest... :: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Foxy Posted March 2, 2005 Report Share Posted March 2, 2005 Unrequited first love It's really nice... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted March 2, 2005 Report Share Posted March 2, 2005 That sounds like the girl was me. Was the boy in the poem's name Simon by any chance? Well done! Good one! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edna Posted March 2, 2005 Report Share Posted March 2, 2005 That sounds like the girl was me. Was the boy in the poem's name Simon by any chance? Wow, Sue, you´d better don´t fall in love with a musician... they´re always soooo busy with their music! I have a couple of musicians among my ex boyfriends... boredom! have you spent HOURS at the rehearsals? Or in the studio, just being "the girl"? My current hubby had a band and still plays but I stay home or do my own life when he´s with the "other" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrampledUnderFoot Posted March 2, 2005 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2005 Was the boy in the poem's name Simon by any chance? Haha, I'm not really sure who it's about...it just kinda flowed... :: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted March 2, 2005 Report Share Posted March 2, 2005 I was sharing a personal experinece - never mind. :: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrampledUnderFoot Posted March 3, 2005 Author Report Share Posted March 3, 2005 I was sharing a personal experinece - never mind. :: No no, I understood that, but just in general...I really have no clue who it's about it, lol Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
windy1 Posted March 6, 2005 Report Share Posted March 6, 2005 I really liked this. That's it, simply put. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Elvish Posted March 9, 2005 Report Share Posted March 9, 2005 Hmmm. . . kind of seems like a prologue to "Killing Me Softly" It's a very classy poem/song. Thumbs up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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