marko90 Posted March 1, 2005 Report Share Posted March 1, 2005 OK, this is my newest one, I took a break from my regular topic of heart break and had a kit-kat! no but here it is, enjoy and feedback please! SOCIETY Sitting here alone, society has won By myself society takes its toll To be me is not cool And to be seen with me is wrong Alone for all these days By myself society has taken its toll Sewn together with lies Woven with deception Glued together with deceit Floored by defeat Alone, society has won Lost in the image of cool I do not fit, a broken fool Only friends when others are not around Played like a game before tossed to the ground By myself society has taken its toll ~Marko Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
TrampledUnderFoot Posted March 2, 2005 Report Share Posted March 2, 2005 "Sewn together with lies Woven with deception Glued together with deceit Floored by defeat" Oh, I love that part Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Addictedtoclassic Posted March 2, 2005 Report Share Posted March 2, 2005 It sounds like a story being told by an outcast. Someone that does not feel they have been able to fit in with the rest of the world. They strive for individuality, but realize that, in the end, society will bring down our ways of becoming an individual. Maybe I'm reading into it too much. I really like it though. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marko90 Posted March 2, 2005 Author Report Share Posted March 2, 2005 Actually you would be right on there, that is what I ment by it pretty well exactly Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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