Ender Posted March 1, 2005 Report Share Posted March 1, 2005 I havent talked to you since my mother died That was months ago and everynight ive cried But i havent died yet even though ive tried i know this might seem odd but im writing me a letter and im sending it to god im addressing it to hell because its what i went through I just have to tell what i think of you So when you read my letter tell her i say hi and ill see her again when life passes me bye i know this might seem odd but im writing me a letter and im sending it to god i know shes happy where she is but i think every mom wants to be with her kids so i end by saying this love your mom and dad and love the one your with i know this might seem odd but im wrote me a letter and i sent it to god Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edna Posted March 1, 2005 Report Share Posted March 1, 2005 Hi, Ender! I like your poem very much... I don´t know if it´s about some personal experience but it touched me. It´s simple and so touching... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mairi Posted March 1, 2005 Report Share Posted March 1, 2005 That was very touching, Ender. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
she_screams_in_silence Posted March 1, 2005 Report Share Posted March 1, 2005 well hello there! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karhul Posted March 1, 2005 Report Share Posted March 1, 2005 God has a capital "G" in it. Great poem!!!. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jenny Posted March 1, 2005 Report Share Posted March 1, 2005 Touching, sad and sweet. Good work, Ender Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uncle Joe Posted March 1, 2005 Report Share Posted March 1, 2005 Umm, Gen and Mairi...I don't think we're allowed to have two Glaswegians (Glasgowians?) posting consecutively. You're tying up the Scottish internet. Now before you go beating up on me....just kidding! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edna Posted March 1, 2005 Report Share Posted March 1, 2005 Umm, Gen and Mairi...I don't think we're allowed to have two Glaswegians (Glasgowians?) posting consecutively. You're tying up the Scottish internet. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Addictedtoclassic Posted March 2, 2005 Report Share Posted March 2, 2005 It's good, but the line "But I'm writing me a letter" doesn't quite sound right with the word "me" in it. I do like how you bring in a happy statement with the sadness and anger being felt throughout. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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