Digging in the rhyme mine blues

[Paul35621]

Is this a poem or a song? I dont know anyway tell me what you think.

Digging in the rhyme mine blues

Something is missing, the jigsaws not complete

The structures there, it?s built to run

But it ain?t got no feet

It might not go anyware, but I?m having fun

Who knows could stun!

I could be the one!

Passing time, putting words together

Digging in the rhyme mine

I don?t know what?s missing, but I?ll find it somehow

And if I don?t I?ll make it to the end, anyhow

The TV?s blaring, but its not there

Words are powerful, but so is a bear

Jotting notes, trying to hit a nerve

If I hit it, who knows where this could go!

Looking for the flow

Passing time, putting words together

Digging in the rhyme mine

I don?t know what?s missing, but I?ll find it somehow

And if I don?t I?ll make it to the end, anyhow

Out of shiny green anthologies, it flows like silver and looks so neat

Deeper than a dead mans shoes, Knocks you right of your feat

I wise I had a muse wise of the streets

To show me where it?s at, let me follow her beat

Passing time, putting words together

Digging in the rhyme mine

I don?t know what?s missing, but I?ll find it somehow

And if I don?t I?ll make it to the end, anyhow

Dylan, Ginsberg, The Wolf

T.S Elliot like a Bolt

Catapult, Sting like a Bee, Rock the Boat

Duck

I?m stuck

Hit the wrong note

Running on empty, no coat

Passing time, putting words together

Digging in the rhyme mine

I don?t know what?s missing, but I?ll find it somehow

And if I don?t I?ll make it to the end, anyhow

The end

Hoped you like, if you don?t on your bike!

["oh joker man you know what he wants

but jokerman you dont show any responce"]

[Addictedtoclassic]

I can picture someone reading this at a poetry reading in a coffee house in New York City. It's has a very cool and rhythmic sound to it, but it would sound odd to music. Much better spoken than sang (just from what I was doing in my head). Very interesting...