Paul35621 Posted February 21, 2005 Report Share Posted February 21, 2005 Is this a poem or a song? I dont know anyway tell me what you think. Digging in the rhyme mine blues Something is missing, the jigsaws not complete The structures there, it?s built to run But it ain?t got no feet It might not go anyware, but I?m having fun Who knows could stun! I could be the one! Passing time, putting words together Digging in the rhyme mine I don?t know what?s missing, but I?ll find it somehow And if I don?t I?ll make it to the end, anyhow The TV?s blaring, but its not there Words are powerful, but so is a bear Jotting notes, trying to hit a nerve If I hit it, who knows where this could go! Looking for the flow Passing time, putting words together Digging in the rhyme mine I don?t know what?s missing, but I?ll find it somehow And if I don?t I?ll make it to the end, anyhow Out of shiny green anthologies, it flows like silver and looks so neat Deeper than a dead mans shoes, Knocks you right of your feat I wise I had a muse wise of the streets To show me where it?s at, let me follow her beat Passing time, putting words together Digging in the rhyme mine I don?t know what?s missing, but I?ll find it somehow And if I don?t I?ll make it to the end, anyhow Dylan, Ginsberg, The Wolf T.S Elliot like a Bolt Catapult, Sting like a Bee, Rock the Boat Duck I?m stuck Hit the wrong note Running on empty, no coat Passing time, putting words together Digging in the rhyme mine I don?t know what?s missing, but I?ll find it somehow And if I don?t I?ll make it to the end, anyhow The end Hoped you like, if you don?t on your bike! ["oh joker man you know what he wants but jokerman you dont show any responce"] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Addictedtoclassic Posted February 21, 2005 Report Share Posted February 21, 2005 I can picture someone reading this at a poetry reading in a coffee house in New York City. It's has a very cool and rhythmic sound to it, but it would sound odd to music. Much better spoken than sang (just from what I was doing in my head). Very interesting... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Recommended Posts
Please sign in to comment
You will be able to leave a comment after signing in
Sign In Now