marko90 Posted February 18, 2005 Report Share Posted February 18, 2005 Another one of my songs...enjoy Leave Me [Verse 1] In the dark of night, I see you here In the silence of night, I hear you On my tear stained pillow, I bleed you Through my fake smile, you know I need you {Chorus} Leave me, Stop following me Leave me, Stop haunting me Leave me, Stop stalking me Leave me, I need to be free [Verse 2] I miss the times, we?d walk hand-in-hand I miss the hours, you spent in my arms I miss the days, when you were mine I miss the times, you?d say ?I love you? {Chorus} Leave me, Stop following me Leave me, Stop haunting me Leave me, Stop stalking me Leave me, I need to be free [Verse 3] This pain, it?s consuming me This silence, its devastating This Life, doesn?t feel right This world, its all upside down {Chorus} Leave me, Stop following me Leave me, Stop haunting me Leave me, Stop stalking me Leave me, I need to be free ((FADING OUT)) This pain, it?s consuming me This silence, its devastating Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Foxy Posted February 18, 2005 Report Share Posted February 18, 2005 It's good ~ kinda reminds me of Evanescence Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Addictedtoclassic Posted February 19, 2005 Report Share Posted February 19, 2005 Wow Mark, it sounds like you're starting to get over the big break up. It's a good song, but the sadness you've been writing about seems to be a little overwhelming lately. It's nice to see that you write with your emotions and fill a song with that, but when will we see some happiness come from you? But I really hate to say this, I've read better songs from you. I think you can do better, but it's still better than a lot of them I've seen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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