Left me

[marko90]

Here is my newest peice, still about my break up...

LEFT ME

[Verse 1]

Now I?m left bleeding

You were so misleading

Why did you leave this alone?

Leaving me here to morn

{Chorus}

You heart was ice cold

Now I have to break this mold

You left me wondering why

Taking all ability for me to fly

All I have left to do is cry

[Verse 2]

You tore my heart out

Leaving a hole,

This is taking its tole

You took that knife,

You put it right through

There is nothing left for me to do

{Chorus}

You heart was ice cold

Now I have to break this mold

You left me wondering why

Taking all ability for me to fly

All I have left to do is cry

[Verse 3]

How can you say this is so right?

When it only feels wrong

You took me, and you shook me

I have been sent for a loop

{Chorus}

You heart was ice cold

Now I have to break this mold

You left me wondering why

Taking all ability for me to fly

All I have left to do is cry

((Fading out))

How can you say this is so right?

When it only feels wrong

(((REPEAT 2x)))

[Mairi]

I liked it, i don't think it was as good as some of your other stuff but in comparison to many other pieces of writing that have graced this board, it was good.

(meaning no offence to others, i just want peace on this forum *starts humming*)

[Addictedtoclassic]

Obviously very heart-broken about the entire situation. The piece is very icy but filled with emotion. It's pretty good, but I've seen you write better.

This is the only line I found that really appears to be out of place and just doesn't sound right.

I have been sent for a loop

Other than that it sounds all right. Although the patterns change from verse to verse...

[RBB]

The song is very good, I know it is. The fact that you feel the subject brings that raw emotion to the table. Overall it's a good job..

[Uncle Joe]

It's got a good beat. I think I could dance to it.