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scott

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I wrote this when I was supposed to be takin' notes on the Civil War in history, but I've already learned about the civil war a billion times, so this seemed like a better way to spend my time

I wrote this a little differently then I've written before, it really focuses on structure and line breaks

Run, crawl, limp

to get away

anything

to leave here

everything

to be free

its empty

in this place

there's nothing

over there

its plastic

way back here

our fate

sealed

the End

purchased

by no one

but ourselves

it was bought

policy

no returns

we broke it

so we broke it

some more

supernova

our sun ends

explosive

our demise

useless

Humanity

I really like the 'we broke it, so we broke it, some more' part for some reason....

EDIT- Feedback always welcome from the wonderful s-facts community.

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I've asked this before, but I figure I might as well again.

Is there anyway I can pop some home recordings on the net? 'cuz I've got a whole crapload of my stuff recorded (some of it excellent (for example 'Fate' I love the sound that I came up with, it sounds like somethin' outta 'In Utero') to the awful, to the stuff that me and my band worked out (mostly covers)) and would like to post it somewhere (and then y'all can hear it too)

Thanks :thumbsup:

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