marko90 Posted February 1, 2005 Report Share Posted February 1, 2005 Over [Verse 1] Nothing feels just right anymore Ever since the night I hit the floor You cut me deep In solitude I weep {Chorus} Would you be so kind And erase yourself from my mind I need to get over you But I cant bring myself to [Verse 2] I can still see you Sitting so close to me Telling me what you wanted to be Seems it had nothing to do with being free {Chorus} Would you be so kind And erase yourself from my mind I need to get over you But I cant bring myself to [Verse 3] I can finally see this clearly I cant get over you Because I don?t want to Cant you see? I need you here with me Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mairi Posted February 1, 2005 Report Share Posted February 1, 2005 i really liked it, especially the first verse, well done Marko Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Foxy Posted February 1, 2005 Report Share Posted February 1, 2005 Great one. Can totally relate to wanting to erase someone from your mind! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Karhul Posted February 3, 2005 Report Share Posted February 3, 2005 Has anyone here ever wrote a happy song?. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marko90 Posted February 3, 2005 Author Report Share Posted February 3, 2005 Yeah, I have, a couple of them...look around for them... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
pink_bubbles Posted February 5, 2005 Report Share Posted February 5, 2005 Wow. I really liked it. Great work, keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Addictedtoclassic Posted February 9, 2005 Report Share Posted February 9, 2005 A great song about how hard it can be to get over a failed relationship. The meaning is great, but the flow seems a little choppy. Added to music it might sound right, but structure doesn't always sound right when you just read lyrics. It shows emotion, I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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