invisible_r Posted January 28, 2005 Report Share Posted January 28, 2005 ok, i wrote this when i was in school and it was published in the school paper, so im not too embarassed about sharing it here. Fire... Such an interesting invention.. Such a beautiful creation... Such a useful weapon... The blue light... Deadly bright, like the dark blue sky Trembling like a leaf Altering the images projected before it The orange-yellow flame Soflexible and swift Like a ballet dancer swaying though the stage Like the wind that embraces all And what an image.. The flames licking him Covering all his body with great passion Like an erotic act The skin, melting like plastic Dripping and moving to different directions Destroying the facade Altering the characteristics How serene.. No blood, no violent tool Just pain in its purest form And a scream of despair begging for mercy But I hear nothing Enjoying the fruits of my effort Peacefully watching what I always wanted Befall before my eyes It is his punishment For being who he is For doing what he did For leaving me alone So vulnerable and lonely.... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MindCrime Posted January 28, 2005 Report Share Posted January 28, 2005 Intriguingly comprehensive writing with plenty of metaphoric use in a pyromania type of sense. Just don?t start any forest fires lol. 8.9/10 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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