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Organise(d) Religion(copyright Mairi Innes 2005)

I swipe souls from the souless

and promise an apocolypse

I ask you to worship

slashing blissful smiles off frozen lips

And you ask me to judge?

Just your average vengeful meglomaniac

guilty of nothing but fraud

Almighty power purely for my own benefit

Carefree, hostile, I'm God

Chorus

Afflict those who stand their ground,

taunt those to whom shackles are bound

Racial sanitation by segregational means

blessing the sane few with prophetical dreams

be damned those who can't make the right decision

that's how I organise my religion

I bleed misfortune unto you

but easily shift the blame

Force the public to be deceived

and feel the upmost shame

Yet still you want my approval?

Always contradicting the written lies

about who and what I am

So many cultures, so little time

So i do as little as i can

Chorus

Afflict those who stand their ground,

taunt those to whom shackles are bound

Racial sanitation by segregational means

blessing the sane few with prophetical dreams

be damned those who can't make the right decision

that's how I organise my religion

Effortlessly convincing those to read the lies

they believe but don't understand

Nodding their heads, closing their eyes

Knealing before where i stand

Yet still they don't realise?

It's such a jest, this gargantuan charade

No one realises that i'm a fraud

Almighty power at my own disposal

What larks, look at me, i'm God.

ok, thoughts please :rockon:

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I haven't posted, or even read anything on this forum in months, but this one caught my eye when I saw it on the main page. It maintains a fascinating theme & stays within the boundaries of its unique point, despite the typo in the title. I give it a 9.5 out of 10.

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I haven't posted, or even read anything on this forum in months, but this one caught my eye when I saw it on the main page. It maintains a fascinating theme & stays within the boundaries of its unique point, despite the typo in the title. I give it a 9.5 out of 10.

What typo? Do you mean 'Organised'? Mairi is from the UK - thats how we spell it over here..

Thats some good writing Mairi...

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What typo? Do you mean 'Organised'? Mairi is from the UK - thats how we spell it over here..

Actually I was referring to the missing "I" in religion, but I suppose that could be misinterpreted, and something I didn't know. You see, I learn something new each day here on Songfacts. ::

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you know im a big christian. And this poem rocks!

I dont think ive ever really heard anything that has the thoughts of God. Nobody has ever dared to cross that line. Some people may ask...how do you know God?

This really is awesome Mairi! I write alot of poetry, i just havent been to this section of songfacts in awhile.

Pure amazingnes.

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Thanks dudes, i had writers block for a while until i wrote this so it's nice to see it has been appriciated well. and Psycho, i thought you would say something negative mainly because i voiced my opinions on a tough subject but im glad you liked it! cheers :coolio:

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