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Hands on the Bible


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This is about a death or loss of a loved one (This wasnt really made to entertain the masses more just to help me, sorry if you dont like it)

She was the first to hear me talk

She was the first to see me walk

Y did god have to take her away?

There was so much left to say

Now i sit and cry like a child

With my Hands on the Bible

(Hands on the Bible)

She was my crying shoulder

I can no longer hold her

I didnt think god could do more

I didnt see what he had in store

And now I scream at my rival

With my Hands on the Bible

(Hands on the Bible)

Maybe taking her was right

But i still cry at night

Try to move on with all my mite

Since than its been nothing but stress

And thats not half of my unhappiness

Now i question my survival

With my Hands on the Bible

(Hands on the Bible)

Id die just to have her back

I just dont know how to act

So i write to help me cope

And fill my brains with false hopes

I read the book of my revival

With my Hands on the Bible

(Hands on the Bible)

(Hands on the Bible)

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First of all PsychoCatholic you truly scare me...and not in a good way.

What i dont get about this piece, is why are your hands on the bible. Its obvious that turning to god doesnt make the pain of losing her go away, what does it somehow console you a bit?

Hmm interesting piece, but id be more apt to toss the damn thing against the wall for letting me suffer on like that myself. Still I thought this was pretty well developed, and that the questioning of your faith in a time like that to be very apt.

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Writing is a very powerful tool to share your emotions and your feelings and to help yourself work through difficult times. This piece has a beautiful effect to it that shows a trust and a non-understanding of what has occurred. I really like it. It's a good way to reflect upon a death of someone near you. It's like asking God why it happened, while saying to yourself that it was probably meant to happen that way.

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