Paul35621 Posted January 20, 2005 Report Share Posted January 20, 2005 I saw you off in the distance walking towards me Our eyes met, Our souls touched I felt my inhabitations go free I was sure you were lonely a self imposed outcast just like me For that brief moment on a busy street I should have made a move opened my mouth showed my heart But my inhibitions rose up a wall keeping us apart Baby our love never even got a chance to start I let you go I?m such a fool I let another one get away and ill probably never see her again Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
babyduck85 Posted January 21, 2005 Report Share Posted January 21, 2005 i honestly think that's great! it's really honest and very sweet. i don't know if my opinion counts cuz i don't write poetry but i am a romantic and i love writing. mind if i ask who the girl is? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jman14141414 Posted January 21, 2005 Report Share Posted January 21, 2005 Wow, that's really good! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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