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Sillyguy4u04

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Hey, I know this probably really sucks, but I wrote it. I am having trouble coming up with a beat for it. Can someone please help?

It was late one night

You called me on the phone

You said it was a fight

The story is just too long

I told you I had nothing better to do

You explain the situtation it was him

I spent the whole night listenin to you

You said its ok he wont do it again

I dont know why you let him hurt you so much

What you really need is a gentle loving touch

But it's always "give it another day", hes got something

to say, You've got tears in your eyes, let me fix things

baby dont cry, Ill always be here I promise its a fact, just please

stop lettin him treat you like that

It happened again its worse this time,

He hits you and tells u ur worthless

This guy is lower than slime

Ill hold u with you head on my chest

Theres nothing I can really do

Until you decide you cant take anymore

So Ill just comfort you

Until you make the choice to walk out the door

I cant understand how you put up with it

Its way past time for you to spilt

But it's always "give it another day", hes got something to say,

You've got tears in your eyes, let me fix things baby dont cry, Ill

always be here I promise its a fact, just please stop lettin him

treat you like that

This time he went to far

It wasnt just a smack

Now he's left a scar

I wont take this sitting back

You beg me to stay calm

You'll do it on ur own

We go talk to your mom

She tells you to come home

Finally youve broke the chains your finally free

You look into my eyes and say you want me

It's finally the last day, you dont want to hear what he has to

say, I wiped those tears from your eyes, you have no more

reasons to cry, Ill always be here I promise thats a fact, you

finally stopped lettin him treat you like that

Ill never treat you like that

Ill never treat you like that

I guess what Im lookin 4 is sum1 who can provide an original beat or sum1 who has a suggestion of a jacked beat to put it too, jus the beat from any song Please help! Any genre is cool too :help:

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  • 1 month later...

To many words for a slow tempo/beat. The song will be ten minutes long.

I'm hearing a relatively rapid and staccato beat. When you get to the two line chorus, it should turn to screaming anger. Electric guitar ripping power chords.

Then back to the original pace.

Just my two cents. :guitar:

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