RBB Posted January 20, 2005 Report Share Posted January 20, 2005 Verse 1 Since I was a little boy, I?d listen to your every word. Every gasp of every breath, was never seen never heard. Hold your pride above inside, yet I can see the hate, in your eyes. Chorus So what should I say. Should I blow up in your face. Should I say that it?s okay. Can you face this like me. This war of words, is not a game. Verse 2 I then grew up, I then moved on. I tried, to rewrite my past, that can't happen I was wrong. I've made my decisions, can?t you see. I can?t live for you, I must live for me. Chorus So what should I say. Should I blow up in your face. Should I say that it?s okay. Can you face this like me. This war of words, is not a game. Verse 3 Let?s just think. Think like one. Think that our lives Are not just what they appear to be. I know that you, you are right. At times, I was wrong, you can say that I lost sight. But don?t lose touch, or lose your faith. Lose your faith in me. Yeah, in me. Chorus So what should I say. Should I blow up in your face. Should I say that it?s okay. Can you face this like me. This war of words, is not a game. I wrote this in about 5 minutes. Just came to me, have some stuff on my mind, about family. But here it is. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RBB Posted January 24, 2005 Author Report Share Posted January 24, 2005 Does anyone have any feedback? It would be appreciated. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uncle Joe Posted January 24, 2005 Report Share Posted January 24, 2005 As to the writing, quite good. Very clear and to the point. As to the sentiment, perhaps gaining trust in each other will facilitate the faith. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edna Posted January 24, 2005 Report Share Posted January 24, 2005 It´s about family, you say? It seems also about love. I like it, reminds me a little of "Father and Son" (Cat Stevens). Looks very profesional... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RBB Posted January 25, 2005 Author Report Share Posted January 25, 2005 Thank you, yeah me and my pops are not getting along right now... Hard to explain... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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