Black hole that is my soul

[Ender 0]

It seems so long ago

Now this love has taken its toll

My heart you have broken and stole

I see my future begin to unroll

I think by myslef as i take a stroll

Now im caught in this hellhole

Im in this black hole that is my soul

I dont care about the years gone to waste

I care about all the tears i had to taste

I care about the fears that i have faced

Im left feeling alone and out of space

Now all these memories i have to erase

Love cant be replaced, only held and embrased

It seems so long ago

Now this love has taken its toll

My heart you have broken and stole

I see my future begin to unroll

I think by myslef as i take a stroll

Now im caught in this hellhole

Im in this black hole that is my soul

I howl at the moon for my hearts pain

Let the wolf know hes not alone in this game

Outsides nice and sunny but i cant avoid the rain

Cant deal with all of the thoughts in my brain

The only end i see is the end of my life

I know you dont love so will you hand me the knife?

It seems so long ago

Now this love has taken its toll

My heart you have broken and stole

I see my future begin to unroll

I think by myslef as i take a stroll

Now im caught in this hellhole

Im in this black hole that is my soul

[Foxy 0]

Lots of rhyming there - very good

[johnnymahoe 0]

It's a good poem and the rhyming is nice, but i would seperate out the rhyming words a little bit more, instead of 1 rhyming word at the end of each line.