Scott-Free Posted January 4, 2005 Report Share Posted January 4, 2005 Solitude -n- Guilt beyond rescue point like a burning tree surrounded by ashen forest or of what was once falling ashes- like snowflakes on this roof, our minds thoughts so heavy- sinking into scattered guilt i could pick any out and write for days but will not tranfixed on nothing- my roof grows layered in ash thoughts so heavy then nothing full moon lit nights-eyes wide open- i take it all in searching for what was lost in the shadows, it smells so familiar but not a single memory- of where i've stood too many times to forget and yet, there's nothing Scott-Free Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mairi Posted January 5, 2005 Report Share Posted January 5, 2005 fairly different from your normal stuff but i liked it, very good imagery Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marko90 Posted January 5, 2005 Report Share Posted January 5, 2005 That was very well done man!! keep it up! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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