Solitude -n- Guilt

[Scott-Free]

Solitude -n- Guilt

beyond rescue point

like a burning tree surrounded by ashen forest

or of what was once

falling ashes-

like snowflakes

on this roof, our minds

thoughts so heavy-

sinking into scattered guilt

i could pick any out and write for days

but will not

tranfixed on nothing-

my roof grows layered in ash

thoughts so heavy

then nothing

full moon lit nights-eyes wide open-

i take it all in

searching for what was

lost in the shadows, it smells so familiar

but not a single memory-

of where i've stood

too many times to forget

and yet, there's nothing

Scott-Free

[Mairi]

fairly different from your normal stuff but i liked it, very good imagery

[marko90]

That was very well done man!! keep it up!