Ender Posted January 3, 2005 Report Share Posted January 3, 2005 As he watches us from the sky He sees us all cheat and lie He sees women and children die I sit by myself and wonder why I think sadly as i watch the lord cry We have become everything he feared Putting people behind our career He thinks about the humans he held dear We wont get better he sees it clear And now i wipe the lords tears As he watches us from the sky He sees us all cheat and lie He sees women and children die I sit by myself and wonder why I think sadly as i watch the lord cry All he wants is us to be in peace He wants no war in the middle east We kill wild animals and we're the real beasts I encourage love and i want war to cease A lot of emotions we must release As he watches us from the sky He sees us all cheat and lie He sees women and children die I sit by myself and wonder why I think to myself as i watch the lord cry There is nothing left for him to do He sees the mess that we're going through But he cant change it its up to you We say we love him and he loves us too Lets thank him and show him gratitude Time to clean our acts and change our attitudes As he watches us from the sky He sees us all cheat and lie He sees women and children die I sit by myself and wonder why I think sadly as i watch the lord cry Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
sweetie62 Posted January 3, 2005 Report Share Posted January 3, 2005 great poem! good message too -em Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mairi Posted January 4, 2005 Report Share Posted January 4, 2005 wow, loved it! and em, you changed your pic! im not sure which i liked better, that one's cool though! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted January 4, 2005 Report Share Posted January 4, 2005 Sad to say Ender, but it is too true. Strong message in that one, definitely a keeper Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
jim36921 Posted February 4, 2005 Report Share Posted February 4, 2005 Yea im new here and my friend recommended i read this and i thought it was great, good work!! and keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Addictedtoclassic Posted February 9, 2005 Report Share Posted February 9, 2005 This is one of the most wonderful things I have read. It's so powerful and so sad and it's scary how truthful it is. Oddly enough, I feel the same way and have written many pages concerning this same subject. The only thing I can find is a couple of grammatical errors that make some of the lines a bit choppy, but who cares about that? The message is clear, and I only hope others will listen. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danielj Posted February 10, 2005 Report Share Posted February 10, 2005 Wow thats one of the best ive read here. Very Powerful. I like the second stanza. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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