Scott-Free Posted January 3, 2005 Report Share Posted January 3, 2005 tears roll down my face it's been so many years... i'm sorry dad, but this life is just hurting too bad all those years stoned face and cold... that's how a man does his time to get through his bit i'm finally out,i never cried would you be mad now that i shed a tear at your funeral i'm sorry dad,but i can't act stoned face and cold anymore i'll bring my own son to visit your grave someday he'll know it's okay for a man to cry it's okay to tell your son i love you i guess i'll just be doing it differant than you rest in peace i love you [This is a work in progress poem. Feedback much appreciated] Scott-Free Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mairi Posted January 3, 2005 Report Share Posted January 3, 2005 wow, tear in the corner of my eye. that was so emotional and heartfelt, it was beautiful, Scott. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jenny Posted January 4, 2005 Report Share Posted January 4, 2005 Beautiful and touching. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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