Aunt_Acid Posted December 3, 2004 Report Share Posted December 3, 2004 Just when you feel alone Like there?s not a soul who knows You?re wandering mindlessly, stripped of emotion Where are you gonna go? Know there?s someone out there who loves you Know there?s someone out there who cares There?s someone who knows where you are There?s someone who?s gonna be there Lock yourself in your room (Close all the windows and shut all the doors) Pull out a bag of your best friend (Squint your eyes shut, nothing is yours) Lay down a brick built from the day (Lock all the windows and lock all the doors) Make sure no one gets in (Put up the sandbags along the shore) Know there?s someone out there who loves you Know there?s someone out there who cares There?s someone who knows where you are There?s someone who?s gonna be there You should?ve locked the doors tighter (Here they come, with beer on their breath) You can hear them curse as they (Try to bust through, to bring you your death) Hurry, you?d better hide the lighter (Eat all the weed, and get rid of the meth) And now the hammer strikes the door Maybe there?s no one out there who loves you Maybe there?s no one out there who cares But there?s someone who knows where you are And that someone will soon be there. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SoulGirl Posted December 3, 2004 Report Share Posted December 3, 2004 oh my god, the weirdest thing just happened. i was reading your post and i just started crying... that really moved me chris. i love it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted December 3, 2004 Report Share Posted December 3, 2004 I've had goosebumps from the very first line. This may be your best piece yet Chris. Absolutely awesome! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Addictedtoclassic Posted December 3, 2004 Report Share Posted December 3, 2004 Anything written about the power of friendship is definitely worth keeping around. It almost seems like it's about intervention. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marko90 Posted December 3, 2004 Report Share Posted December 3, 2004 BRAVO!!! That was great, I liked the way you wrote that, it was very well done! Keep it up!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edna Posted December 3, 2004 Report Share Posted December 3, 2004 Chris, have thought of putting music to your poem? No joke... it´s excellent, man! Much better than most of what we hear on the radio... it made me wonder about many things... I´ll take the time to read all of your writings. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aunt_Acid Posted December 3, 2004 Author Report Share Posted December 3, 2004 Thank you for all your comments. Yes, as a matter of fact, the music came first. And about 30 seconds after the tune came to me, the lyrics did. If I ever record it, I will post it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marko90 Posted December 3, 2004 Report Share Posted December 3, 2004 That would be great, I'd love to hear it to music... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RBB Posted December 4, 2004 Report Share Posted December 4, 2004 Some good stuff man... Sounds like this song is very personal to you, and usually those are the best songs. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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