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Broken and Used


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OK, this is my newest one, I'd like some feedback please because it helps me become a better writer, spank you, Marko. here it is, Enjoy!!!

Broken and used

[Verse 1]

It?s all over now, I can?t continue this way

You never wanted to stay

You were in this to bring me down

If it was for the best?why do I wear this frown?

You tore me down, kicked and hurt me

I guess its true? love is blind.

Everything was perfect in my mind

{Chorus}

I guess I should thank you

You showed me to stand on my own feet

I stand here today separate from your deceit

I know within me there was no defeat

You left me standing, battered and bruised

Broken and used, I refuse to love you!

[Verse 2]

Now here on the trail of memories

This is a constant reminder of better times

The days where I was in an eternal high

But I guess that trail has died

All because of your lies

{Chorus}

I guess I should thank you

You showed me to stand on my own feet

I stand here today separate from your deceit

I know within me there was no defeat

You left me standing, battered and bruised

Broken and used, I refuse to love you!

[Verse 3]

There was a time when love was in me

Now all that?s left is shattered hate

And yet I can?t live without you

Still, to this day?

I don?t know why I?m so far away

I guess deep down?

I still love you (repeat 2X)

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Good job Mark, I love the chorus.....

I guess I should thank you

You showed me to stand on my own feet

I stand here today separate from your deceit

I know within me there was no defeat

You left me standing, battered and bruised

Broken and used, I refuse to love you!

Good Job

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