marko90 Posted November 28, 2004 Report Share Posted November 28, 2004 This one I wrote after me and my Girlfreind got into an agruement over stupid things that escolated into me saying harsh things about her, and now she isn't talking to me!! ::...anyways here it is...enjoy Why, Oh, Why! [Verse #1] So it seems I have gone and screwed things up again It never surprise?s me, it happens all the time It seems I have let a good thing slip between my fingers again I feel I have a cloud of mistakes hanging high over my head I cannot see the end of it for I am blinded by your love Your love I will never see again because I have screwed it up again {Chorus} Why, oh, why do I always mess it up? Why, oh, why does it always hurt? Why, oh, why can?t I finally get a break? Why oh why?why oh why? Why oh why?why oh why? [Verse #2] I said things I shouldn?t have said? I did things I never should have done? I went places I never should have gone? I screwed things up?. Things I never should have screwed up! Now I stand here looking for you? I am so far away you can never see me. {Chorus} Why, oh, why do I always mess it up? Why, oh, why does it always hurt? Why, oh, why can?t I finally get a break? Why oh why?why oh why? Why oh why?why oh why? [Verse #3] I never meant to hurt you? I never meant to make you cry? I never meant to make you feel low? I only wanted your happiness I only wanted?your love! {Chorus} Why, oh, why do I always mess it up? Why, oh, why does it always hurt? Why, oh, why can?t I finally get a break? Why oh why?why oh why? Why oh why?why oh why? (I only wanted your love) (I only wanted your love) (I only wanted your love) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
CathyF Posted November 30, 2004 Report Share Posted November 30, 2004 Well it certainly sounds like you are regretful and want to make things right. Why not try sending her some flowers along with a copy of this poem? (Pour your heart out) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Addictedtoclassic Posted November 30, 2004 Report Share Posted November 30, 2004 It's good, flows well, and definitely gets the point across. I like it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
johnnymahoe Posted December 28, 2004 Report Share Posted December 28, 2004 it was very good. i was singing it 2 myself and the words sounded like a real song. I would take out the first again on the last line of the first verse, other then that it's very good. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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