marko90 Posted November 25, 2004 Report Share Posted November 25, 2004 OK, this one is one I wrote about my Girlfreind, and my feelings before getting the nerve to ask her out (it was a year of knowing her before I asked her out) LOVE IN YOU I lay here Pieces of me everywhere I lay in wait In wait of you You to love me Glancing at a far Hoping our eyes will meet I see your pain I feel your pain Do you know I exist? Or do you even care? I have placed love in you Only you shall find it For I belong to you There is nothing greater then you Love is what I longed for, Love is what I found in you, You are the only one I love! feedback please! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mairi Posted November 25, 2004 Report Share Posted November 25, 2004 very good, you have a way with words, boyo! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted November 25, 2004 Report Share Posted November 25, 2004 I have placed love in you Only you shall find it For I belong to you Love that bit. Quite standalone in its simplicity. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jillianne Posted November 25, 2004 Report Share Posted November 25, 2004 Very good chicken! Well done! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Zaeem Posted December 8, 2004 Report Share Posted December 8, 2004 Dear Mark, Your effort is really very good and beautiful.Welldone keep it up. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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