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In Pieces (an original copyrighted (!) song)

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You took what I couldn't give

How am I supposed to live with you

And all you do

You broke up my train of thought

I live with the fear I caught from you

And all you do

Come and take another piece of me

All I have is what you left of me

You don't know what you have done

It's so hard to carry on for me

I'm on my knees

You don't know the mess you've made

And all those freaky games you played with me

I'm on my knees

So come and take another piece of me

Because all I have is what you left of me

Come on, bleed me

This is what you do to me

All alone you're what I see, I'm blind

You're in my mind

You will never pay your debt

Though I'm trying to forget I find

You're in my mind

Come and take another piece of me

All I have is what you left of me, me, me, me, me

Come on bleed me, come on bleed me

Come on bleed me, come on bleed me

You don't know, don't know what you do to me

You don't know, don't know what you do to me, don't know what you do to me.

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yes well as you can probably tell it's written from the heart. thanks for posting btw, first person 12 views later! the music to it is up-tempo, in the style of a cross between pj harvey and kristin hersh. i think it's the best song i've written, all the best ones come from true life.

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Wow.. this poem/song reminds me of my last roommate. Long story short... he owed me several months rent, committed various and sundry crimes against me, and the day that he hit me I winded up going to jail for being angry and "out of control" (disorderly conduct) A compulsive liar, paranoid schizophrenic alcoholic, now he's a criminal on the run. I can't believe I ever trusted him. Good riddance! ::

(I like your poem - feel like I can relate)

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