Moving On - poem

[pink_bubbles]

umm... well im new here and yeah lol

heres a poem i wrote awhile ago

Moving On

You sat me down and talked and talked.

Who do you think you are?

Now it is your turn to listen to what I have to say.

You seemed so innocent and ever so sugary sweet,

but I was blind not to see.

At first I was your princess - your girl,

the along the line there was a fault.

I cry these black tears, the blackest tears,

all because of you.

Its your fault not mine,

I shall not cry.

Im gonna put on a smile,

now Im stronger than I ever was.

You have made me so mad,

I do not regret.

You have made me who I am.

I can breathe in peace;

I have put up with your [bleep] too long.

I am leaving,

sealing the door.

Never to haunt me again.

please rate it thanks!!!

[Earth-Angel]

First of all - Welcome to Songfacts Pink_Bubbles! :guitar:

I can see you were and still are hurt about this poem. I hope writing it gave you some closure, and put things into perspective. I think it's great when you can put raw emotion onto paper and people can actually see and know how you felt.

[_Annabelle_]

Welcome Pink Bubbles!

I like your poem and the way you conveyed your feelings so openly. Good job.