pink_bubbles Posted November 17, 2004 Report Share Posted November 17, 2004 umm... well im new here and yeah lol heres a poem i wrote awhile ago Moving On You sat me down and talked and talked. Who do you think you are? Now it is your turn to listen to what I have to say. You seemed so innocent and ever so sugary sweet, but I was blind not to see. At first I was your princess - your girl, the along the line there was a fault. I cry these black tears, the blackest tears, all because of you. Its your fault not mine, I shall not cry. Im gonna put on a smile, now Im stronger than I ever was. You have made me so mad, I do not regret. You have made me who I am. I can breathe in peace; I have put up with your [bleep] too long. I am leaving, sealing the door. Never to haunt me again. please rate it thanks!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted November 17, 2004 Report Share Posted November 17, 2004 First of all - Welcome to Songfacts Pink_Bubbles! :guitar: I can see you were and still are hurt about this poem. I hope writing it gave you some closure, and put things into perspective. I think it's great when you can put raw emotion onto paper and people can actually see and know how you felt. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Annabelle_ Posted November 18, 2004 Report Share Posted November 18, 2004 Welcome Pink Bubbles! I like your poem and the way you conveyed your feelings so openly. Good job. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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