Aunt_Acid Posted November 12, 2004 Report Share Posted November 12, 2004 Everyone empties his or her hearts Into someone else?s hands Days go by, weeks apart I sit waiting to make my stand Well today?s the day I realized That the world doesn?t care Today?s the day I prioritized And escaped the world?s stare The guy next to me is always the one Frequently reminded that he?s blessed God gave him the sun, The human race gave him their best. Well today?s the day I realized I?m in this alone Today?s the day I stood out of sight But I stood on my own. Everyone wants to shake his hand; Everywhere, people wearing his brand I?m their biggest straw man They?re his biggest fan Well today?s the day I realized Just how deep the well goes Today?s the day I found out What every wise man knows. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Flibble12345 Posted November 12, 2004 Report Share Posted November 12, 2004 Awesome man, have you got music to go with that? It would make a brilliant song. :guitar: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jillianne Posted November 12, 2004 Report Share Posted November 12, 2004 Deadly, I agree with chojin here, got any music with it?? Well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted November 12, 2004 Report Share Posted November 12, 2004 That was excellent! Is this another song that is going with the others you wrote? You should put this to music, I hear you're something wicked on a keyboard! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jenny Posted November 12, 2004 Report Share Posted November 12, 2004 That really captures the feeling of jealousy. Wow Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mairi Posted November 12, 2004 Report Share Posted November 12, 2004 argh way to make me nearly cry dude Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aunt_Acid Posted November 12, 2004 Author Report Share Posted November 12, 2004 Thanks for the comments, everyone. Yeah, actually I do have music do go with this. It started with a little riff on guitar and I built off of that. There's an organ part too. I wish I knew more about that 4 track recorder so I could get a general idea of the music recorded. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jillianne Posted November 13, 2004 Report Share Posted November 13, 2004 It started with a little riff on guitar and I built off of that. There's an organ part too. Lets not forget the keyboard.. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
cpride09 Posted November 13, 2004 Report Share Posted November 13, 2004 nice job man keep it up Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aunt_Acid Posted November 13, 2004 Author Report Share Posted November 13, 2004 Lets not forget the keyboard.. Well duh, kerboard pwns piano. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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