marko90 Posted November 1, 2004 Report Share Posted November 1, 2004 ladies and gentlemen, boys and girls, children of all ages, welcome to my newest song!!! anyways, its true I haven't been writting much, but this one just came to me, so I scribbled it down, so lads and gals enjoy and possibly gimme feedback? :: Time to give up [Verse 1] Every day has a mystique sense of Monotony It seems as though every night someone has got to me I through the stench of earth I couldn?t see All I want is to be all I can be! Everyday a kid makes a life-altering plea {Chorus} (((REPEAT X2))) Time to give up Time to surrender You can?t win alone You can?t lose with an army with you Your time is now? Time to give up Time to quit [Verse 2] I know you see the light We all do its just we turn to fight Its time to give it up to him Without him life is dim Its time to stand up Its time to live for him! {Chorus} (((REPEAT x2))) Time to give up Time to surrender You can?t win alone You can?t lose with an army with you Your time is now? Time to give up Time to quit (((Guitar solo apporx 30 seconds))) :guitar: :guitar: :guitar: [Verse 3] Broken and alone Cold and stoned Sick and twisted No matter your situation its? {Chorus} (((REPEAT x2))) Time to give up Time to surrender You can?t win alone You can?t lose with an army with you Your time is now? Time to give up Time to quit :guitar: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RBB Posted November 2, 2004 Report Share Posted November 2, 2004 I love it... it's very Good Charlotte esque. It's really good... Keep it coming'. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danielj Posted November 2, 2004 Report Share Posted November 2, 2004 No nothing that good could be Good Charlotte. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Annabelle_ Posted November 2, 2004 Report Share Posted November 2, 2004 I like it, very well done Marko! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marko90 Posted November 3, 2004 Author Report Share Posted November 3, 2004 thanks all, I appreciate that :guitar: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
onlyone Posted November 7, 2004 Report Share Posted November 7, 2004 i like this too how about "forever with you" ? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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