Jillianne Posted October 25, 2004 Report Share Posted October 25, 2004 Yeah I wrote this like 5 mins ago, its about my friend, who tried to commit suicide and is now in hospital from self-harming, I kind of wrote it in his perspective.. Its really short..I'm not quite sure what it is, lol I'll rape a blade, Make bad memories fade, Yeah, I think I'll do it today, Just to, you know, take it away, I've suddenly discovered a new found bliss, watching this blood, drain out my wrist. bannana--> :happybanana: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted October 25, 2004 Report Share Posted October 25, 2004 Awww Jill, I know that it was written from the heart That's exactly what you're feeling when you're sitting there wanting everything to end. It's not pretty, it's not special and it's not a joke. Makes you think twice and see things from a different perspective. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danielj Posted October 25, 2004 Report Share Posted October 25, 2004 Yeah, Jill that was really from the heart. I liked it. I know how bad you felt for him. Wasnt your fault m'dear. it really was a good poem too. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Mairi Posted October 26, 2004 Report Share Posted October 26, 2004 that was good, you didn't try and soften it, you wrote it as it is which i admire, well done Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jillianne Posted October 26, 2004 Author Report Share Posted October 26, 2004 Hey I have another verse to the poem, thanks everyone, for your kind comments :: edited* I'll rape a blade, Make bad memories fade, Yeah, I think I'll do it today, Just to, you know, take it away, I've suddenly discovered a new found bliss, watching this blood, drain out my wrist. I gaze colourless, at my veins turning puce, taking such delight, in self abuse. Bannana--> :happybanana: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RBB Posted October 28, 2004 Report Share Posted October 28, 2004 Gillian, I really feel something for those verses, or the poem. I have a friend who is in the same situation and I wrote and recorded a song about the situation.... Tears to my eyes, and a tuf at my heart is what that brought to me. Great job... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jillianne Posted October 28, 2004 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2004 Thanks Robert and yeah its really hard to watch, I kinda feel like its my fault :happybanana: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
SoulGirl Posted October 28, 2004 Report Share Posted October 28, 2004 of course it's not your fault jillianne, and deep down i think you know that. i was in a similar situation a few years back. there's nothing you can do but be the best friend you can be, listen to your friend, let him tell you how he feels. but understand that you can't 'fix' him, what he's going through is deeply persoanl and something which only he can overcome. all he needs from you is your support. please don't blame yourself for things over which you have no control. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jillianne Posted October 28, 2004 Author Report Share Posted October 28, 2004 Im not, its just, very, very complicated, he was pretty angry with me. :happybanana: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted October 28, 2004 Report Share Posted October 28, 2004 Jill, you know it wasn't your fault And he knows you were there for him when he needed you the most, and you still are! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edna Posted October 28, 2004 Report Share Posted October 28, 2004 I read on a magazine this morning "Suicide is the worst attack a person can do to another. It´s egoism". I understand your friend might feel very bad, but we are all human beings and we can SPEAK CLEAR... not blackmail. Hope everything gets allright, Jill. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel2Velvet Posted October 28, 2004 Report Share Posted October 28, 2004 Suicide is neither romantic nor bold; a solution nor resolution. It is he ultimate form of selfishness. It says, "Here, you that I leave behind, clean up all my messes for me; the old ones, the immediate ones and a sardonic good luck on the problems that won't be manifesting themselves for a good long while yet. I can't, so you handle them in my place." Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted October 28, 2004 Report Share Posted October 28, 2004 Like people tossing themselves in front of trains :: I can't tell you the number of times our service has been delayed or cancelled because of people committing suicide on the tracks! I can't imagine how the train driver or the passengers feel to have witnessed something as gruesome and sudden as that! The worst is most of the time they do it at the station when they know the train doesn't stop at that platform and it's a fast-moving train....what if there are young children on the platform witnessing that! It's a terrible shame when people feel there is no way out but that Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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