Danielj Posted October 23, 2004 Report Share Posted October 23, 2004 Far away, Across The Milky Way, There are creatures unbelievably THICK! They have no guns, They have no wars, What the hell is on their CNN??? All they do all day, Is read and play, And talk for long periods of time! I don't know what they do, For fun over there! Because they have a Rule Not To Fight. CHORUS: They find it hard, To steal and barge, And kill and kill at all. There is Love over there, And they seem to care about life. Yeah! About Life! Away........................ Away......... Away Guiter Solo Maybe if we try to help them, They could develop a way, They could kill, They could fight, They could kill. CHORUS Guitar Solo BANG BANG BANG Aghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! I wanted to write something today, so I decided to do a song. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Earth-Angel Posted October 23, 2004 Report Share Posted October 23, 2004 I like it because it's a reality check! I know you wrote it quickly, Dan, but you should write more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Danielj Posted October 23, 2004 Author Report Share Posted October 23, 2004 Thanks Sue, I appreciate that, I will write more. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RBB Posted October 23, 2004 Report Share Posted October 23, 2004 Good job I liked how you didn't really rely on ryhming which is really cool. Great job! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jillianne Posted October 24, 2004 Report Share Posted October 24, 2004 Nice work Dan, I like your style of writing, bet you can't wait for your geetar to strum out those solos, eh? And a bannana for you.. :happybanana: :happybanana: :happybanana: :happybanana: :happybanana: :happybanana: :happybanana: :happybanana: :happybanana: :happybanana: :happybanana: :happybanana: :happybanana: :happybanana: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aunt_Acid Posted October 24, 2004 Report Share Posted October 24, 2004 Guiter Solo The only problem is, it's hard to find a good Guiter player these days. Let alone someone who knows what a Guiter is. In all seriousness though, that was a great song. Good work, I especially liked the part at the end, "If we could help them develop a way" or something like that. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jillianne Posted October 24, 2004 Report Share Posted October 24, 2004 The only problem is, it's hard to find a good Guiter player these days. Let alone someone who knows what a Guiter is. Aa-hahahahaha ..Not.. Come on, Roger, Chris, Ron and Dave, you're getting old, where have all the funny jokes gone..? Bannana--> :happybanana: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aunt_Acid Posted October 24, 2004 Report Share Posted October 24, 2004 Apparently to your posts. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jillianne Posted October 25, 2004 Report Share Posted October 25, 2004 Again..not funny, you're losing your touch.. :happybanana: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Aunt_Acid Posted October 25, 2004 Report Share Posted October 25, 2004 Again..not funny Oh, but you are. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jillianne Posted October 25, 2004 Report Share Posted October 25, 2004 Oh, but you are. Aw, thanks..I'm really not though. :: :happybanana: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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