CaptainMikeRS Posted October 20, 2004 Report Share Posted October 20, 2004 This is my tenth song, heavy progressive rock melody, there's not really a lot I can say without spoiling this one. Illusions of Reality (Written October 19, 2004 by Mike R. Smale © 2004) Descend into the dream, leave behind reality. All things seen are lies, in a world of no rationality. Monsters come to life, but move on giant strings. The flower in the garden, hides the bee about to sting. The clouds are moving in, the rain is falling hard. But the only shelter from the storm is a house made out of cards. Descend into the dream, leave behind reality. All things seen are lies, in a world of no rationality. Fight your way through the twisted maze. Look with your heart and lift the haze. And see the light again. Aurora borealis- made from broken traffic lights. A hero leads an army- an army of plastic knights. Descend into the dream, leave behind reality. All things seen are lies, in a world of no rationality. Jump right in. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jenny Posted October 21, 2004 Report Share Posted October 21, 2004 Wow! This is really good, I love the imagery and the way it flows. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
RBB Posted October 21, 2004 Report Share Posted October 21, 2004 I love this man, the words flow and your vocab is great, if you sing, that would be just great, or if it had a tune, looks good man. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Annabelle_ Posted October 21, 2004 Report Share Posted October 21, 2004 Top notch Mike! I like the "Jump right in" in the last chorus. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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