Aunt_Acid Posted October 18, 2004 Report Share Posted October 18, 2004 They cried their lives away Letting everybody know Just how bad they had it One?s been here 7 days Parked in 2A Should have left today Now he?s leaving in a long black limousine The smokers standing outside the doors Like to watch They?re watching yours One after another Sisters and brothers All climb aboard The earth-bound train Again and again Man after man In a delivery van To all their eager fans We take them as they come One after one You seem to lose a sense of measure And block out all the displeasure And while I?ll gladly ring you up Soon we all have to drain the cup To have a customer of my own To have customer quite well-known Now and again We come for fun we come for sin And it looks like they?re letting us in I was a little reluctant to post this, because I'm not the most gifted of writers, but it's a work in progress and if anybody has any ideas to improve it, then let 'em fly. I'll explain this song a little. My grandpa is in the hospital, and we went to visit him yesterday. After we parked, as we were walking through the parking structure to get to the hospital, I noticed all the cars parked there, and realized that there was a story behind each car; a reason why it was there. It gave me the idea for an album, and this song would be the last song on it. It's about a funeral home that receives all the people who die in the hospital. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Annabelle_ Posted October 19, 2004 Report Share Posted October 19, 2004 I liked it, good job. That's a very interesting idea for an album, I'd enjoy reading any other songs you write for it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hetfield Posted October 19, 2004 Report Share Posted October 19, 2004 Not only have u had a brilliant and ballsy idea of a concept album, BUT the concept of the album rocks, Very deep and very cool this is a kewl example of good writing aswell, sticking to the subject, and making sense but still making a lot of it very methodical, good job!! :guitar: Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
edna Posted October 20, 2004 Report Share Posted October 20, 2004 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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