CaptainMikeRS Posted October 11, 2004 Report Share Posted October 11, 2004 This is my seventh song and third love song written for my girlfriend Jenny. This has made several of it's reader's cry, soft rock tune. Eternal Sunset (Written August 5, 2004 by Mike R. Smale © 2004) A painting by angels, a glimpse of paradise, A work of art, in the sky tonight. Like a perfect mirror, it reflects your beauty. As we stand out here, in the day's last light. Under the golden twilight sky, watching the stars with you by my side. The early moonlight glows in your eyes, in this eternal sunset. I'll eternally love you. (Eternal sunset) I'll eternally love you. So what it's getting darker, true love's blind anyway. I'll always be here with you, through every night and day. Under the golden twilight sky, watching the stars with you by my side. The early moonlight glows in your eyes, in this eternal sunset. I'll eternally love you. (Eternal sunset) I'll eternally love you. I'll eternally love you. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
_Annabelle_ Posted October 11, 2004 Report Share Posted October 11, 2004 Very beautiful Mike, well done! You certainly have an enjoyable way with words and imagery. Jenny is a lucky gal. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
marko90 Posted October 12, 2004 Report Share Posted October 12, 2004 :: HOLY MOLY THAT WAS AMAZING!! I ABSOLELUTY LOVED THAT! I wish I could write like that, I could relate to EVERY WORD WRITTEN!!! I loved it keep it up hombre!! MARKO Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Jenny Posted October 12, 2004 Report Share Posted October 12, 2004 It's a very sweet song and nicely written. Your Jenny should be very flattered. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
aurora Posted October 16, 2004 Report Share Posted October 16, 2004 Beautiful!!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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