DeezyType Posted March 2, 2015 Report Share Posted March 2, 2015 (edited) The Moonlight shines off the waterReflecting the beauty from the HeavensThe starlight so bright, bringing me to my kneesOn this pier, I am alone,Why am I here? I was born to leadBut I chose thrills to seekI lost my faith, lost my namePrayers consisted of needles and flameLife seems a desolate wastelandBut I was born to lead With the clouds overhead, painted black by the skyI think of where I've been, became friends with SuicideA bottle of pills, and a bottle of jackDrowned by emptiness, I could feel nothingBut now I feel my heart, they've brought me back No thought in mind, only broken heartedMy eyes were sunken, life was consumingI rose from the dead, and corruption eruptedScars all over, blood on my sheetsI stood at the edge, now sinking, now drifting away Its funny how you have to lose it allJust to realize what you hadNow that my pockets are emptyAnd You've seen my handWon't you run with me to the end? I was born to leadBut I chose thrills to seekI lost my faith, lost my namePrayers consisted of needles and flameBut now I'm home, and I stand strongCuz I was born to lead So just run with me Copr. Mason DuPont Edited April 15, 2015 by DeezyType Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayzor Posted March 4, 2015 Report Share Posted March 4, 2015 Cool. I can relate to this one. Glad to see someone take over the Creative Writing after I stopped and doing a great job! Yoo rite gud Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
DeezyType Posted March 4, 2015 Author Report Share Posted March 4, 2015 Thanks a bunch Rayzor! You have really good work yourself! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Rayzor Posted March 5, 2015 Report Share Posted March 5, 2015 Thanks! I used to have a couple dozen posted here, but felt kind of strange being the only one sharing. There was also a near-publication experience that led to a mass deletion of my poetry from the boards. Honestly, it's more fun being able to bounce pointers, notes, etc. off other writers than just writing. Having people enjoy it is a great feeling, but without tips I'm not sure if I'm missing a small detail (sometimes just one word) that can make a good poem/song into a great one. That's when I know the reader can be truly entranced by my words. That's just me, though. I noticed you write in a lyrical style (mostly) & you're very good at it. I used to write lyrics for bands back in the 80/90's but not that well. Much talent!! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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