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Well, I may as well post stuff here for feedback. I hear this as an extremely powerful, angry rocker, sounding like something off the Who's LIVE AT LEEDS...

And you

You let me down

You

You let me down

When I was sick and tired and needed someone to love to

You didn?t care cause you had something new

I couldn't believe it

I couldn't believe it was you

When I was bleeding crying on your front door babe

You closed the window shut the blinds and what is more babe

You could have heard me

You could have learned from me

I couldn't believe it

I couldn't believe it was you

And I hear the lies you tell to your friend-collection

And I think how you have twisted life to fit your own perceptions

You may think that you're fooling me, but I don't let that much pass me by?

If I didn't see you again would you miss me?

There was a time when I would have missed you

And if I came back

Disguised as your friend there would you know me?

Could you see through me like I saw through you?

And you

You let me down

And you

You let me down

You let me down

?2004. All rights reserved. (Really.)

I know the lyrics are simplistic, but that's just because they're bare on the page...this is also one of my first attempts at writing an all-out rock song, which is hard for me.

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