J Hill Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Stone Written Poem An ugly man with confidence is quite the sight to see I’m finally seeing who makes the rules And that man is really me. When you see the people passing by, hunger in their eyes Be sure to hold your groceries close But don't just pass them by. And when we finally all decide to call our hurts our own The god’s may fight and fly into a rage For the truth will then be known. At long last now I figured it out, I’ve finally found the tonic If today by accident I’m hit by a truck Now, that would be ironic. *jdh* Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel2Velvet Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 Replace "truck" with "steamroller" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
blind-fitter Posted February 6, 2009 Report Share Posted February 6, 2009 ...so that it will no longer scan correctly? Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
J Hill Posted February 7, 2009 Author Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 (edited) ....i wish i knew the reason. Why?.... "If by steamroller accident from a truck I am struck..." ...hmmmmm... or.... "If by steamroller accident today I am struck" .....i still wish i knew the new reason. Why? ?????????????????? Edited February 7, 2009 by Guest "well deserved obscurity" Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MuzikTyme Posted February 7, 2009 Report Share Posted February 7, 2009 The only reason is, "just because" Good prose, J Hill . . . Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Steel2Velvet Posted February 10, 2009 Report Share Posted February 10, 2009 ....i wish i knew the reason. Why?.... "If by steamroller accident from a truck I am struck..." ...hmmmmm... or.... "If by steamroller accident today I am struck" .....i still wish i knew the new reason. Why? ?????????????????? Because, if your character were run over by a steamroller: "Now, that would be ironic." (iron-ic) Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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