Hate

[Blue Fish]

Hate knows only half the story,

Hate sees half the veiw

Hate does things you didn't mean to do.

Hate can poison all your life

or simpley ruin your day,

hate says things you didn't mean to say.

Hate can turn your heart to stone

and turn your voice to steel.

Hate takes allthe good things you feel,

Turns them into dust and ashes,

makes the truth a lie,

hates to busy growing to ask why.

Hate will make your friend your enemy,

Hate will starta war,

Is hate something worth dieing for?

No doubt there are some spelling mistakes of grammar issues in this poem, please only comment on the actual poem its self, not the spelling and grammar. Thank you.

[Udo]

Oh so true. I like it.

[Kevin]

2 for 2 . You're on a roll, girl !

[Shawna]

oooo nice poem, Bloof! I likey. Especially "Hate's too busy growing to ask why." There's a line I wish I'd have written myself.

[Blue Fish]

I'll let you guys in on a secret...I wrote it when I was ten.... I just found it in my scrap book and thought I'd see what you thought....