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hi guys i updated the poem i took you guys advise and used it i hope you like it and i know this poem is politically chagred but please dont let the thread turn into a debate about that thx

don't act so refined

you can't say

that you had tried very hard when you didn't

because that'd be just another lie

and i'm not satisfied

don't act so defined

you can't lay

that you had tried very hard when you didn't

because that'd be just another falsehood

and i'm not happy

i got you your favorite things

but you won't give me mine

two-way relationship on a one-way road

you stopped for hitchhikers while driving backward

but i own these pangs

if you don't understand as i'm sure you were just along for the ride

that i'm the one hurting inside

because i know i'm right

i should have been the one to fill your dark soul with light

Edited by Guest
as requested

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